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6/9/2013

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Darlene walked out of our house on her way to work yesterday morning.  A few moments later she returned to the door with her hands cupped around something and a look on her face that let me know instantly something was wrong.  Held gently in her hands was a tiny feathered baby .. left by its Mother because it was the weakest and couldn't keep up with the others.  We immediately began attempting to hydrate the chick and I pulverized some fresh vegetables in that magical kitchen machine I use for my own fresh juices.  All the while this little waif was vocalizing the need for its own Mother, but we continued doing the best we could .. knowing her Mother would never reappear as she tended to the healthier chicks, teaching them how to find life giving morsels in the grass around our home.

Darlene had to get going and I had planned my day out, conducting two Open House sittings.  After Darlene left, I continued the effort to nourish and strengthen this beautiful yet helpless creature.  Holding it gently in one hand, I did my best to give it the liquid sustenance it so obviously needed. 

My plan was to get the pitifully weak chick strengthened enough to be able to stand on its own and eat from a container placed in the box we had prepared so it would be comfortable and safe from harm while I was away from the house.  But as time passed I realized the effort was futile as this little baby became weaker and weaker.  

Somewhere along the line of two hours with the helpless chick, I had fallen in love.  The idea of leaving her alone was no longer an option .. in fact, the idea of setting her down was no longer an option.  With the realization of death so near, I couldn't bear to part with her, so I took her with me to my easy chair, leaned back, placed her on my bare chest where it was warm and gently cradled my hand around her diminutive body .. and there we sat for the next couple of hours.  I sang to her, I prayed for her, and I loved her until she took her last tiny breath and her soul was freed .. then I cried for her short physical existence. 

I will never forget this experience.  She is buried under the beautiful Tropicana Rose in our yard.  The very rose Darlene gave to me for Valentines Day this year.  Every time I look at a flower on that plant I will feel both love and sadness for the beautiful soul that touched me so deeply.

She was a precious gift.  She was a teacher.  The thoughts bombarding me while holding the little chick were truly a revelation.  Her very presence in my life for those few fleeting moments gave insight that was desperately needed.  She opened a portal to my heart and rejuvenated the power of love within me.  Dear friends, one thing is for certain ..
I have been to "Chicken School"
&
I wish the same for each of you ...

from Kauai to Paris ... and all places between




20 Comments
Sonja
6/9/2013 12:01:58 pm

Very touching, Bill. :-)

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Bill link
6/9/2013 12:09:38 pm

Thanks so much, Sonja, I'm glad it touched you. What an incredibly moving experience it was ... Mahalo et Merci! Bill

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Sally
6/9/2013 03:24:04 pm

I can feel it Billy. Sweet story. Thank you for sharing. Loving you, Sally

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Bill link
6/9/2013 05:51:16 pm

Thanks 'lil Sis .. such a treat to hear from both you and Sonja after my month long absence! Loving you back ... Brother Bill

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Jules Greer
6/10/2013 08:36:20 am

Darling Bill,

Thank you for sharing this precious moment - you touched me with your tenderness - a story that will remain with me forever.

XOXO

JULES

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Bill link
6/10/2013 09:03:16 am

JULES! You are welcome .. Thank you for reading a supporting me, it means so much. I'm certain you are missing France, as I always do, and wish you a quick return to "our" home across the ocean! Mahalo, Gracias, et Merci ... Bill

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Pat
6/10/2013 09:27:20 am

Oh, Bill, my heart is in crumbles around my feet~to be loved like this is what all humanity yearns for: just to be held, loved completely and then released to further travels in such a gentle way. Oh death! where is thy sting!? Thanks for this sweet story, Bill.

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Bill link
6/10/2013 10:02:06 am

How blessed am I .. To have such wonderful Readers! Thank you, Pat ... Thank you all! Bill

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Susan Carter
6/10/2013 10:48:32 am

Beautiful story, as evidenced by my tears falling.

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Bill link
6/10/2013 11:16:38 am

Susan .. You display your exemplary character with that comment. Thank you for being a part of today's posting. Bill

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cynthia Lewis
6/10/2013 04:04:25 pm

Thank you for sharing such tender moments and thoughts; it was beautiful and moving.

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Bill link
6/10/2013 04:16:48 pm

And thank you for that comment, Cynthia. Wow .. it is amazing such a tiny creature has touched us in such a profound manner. She was so beautiful, so helpless, and so perfect ... thank you for recoginizing her short and significant life.

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Heidi
6/11/2013 03:24:53 am

A genuine caring and loving shine through the photo image of that tiny creature held in gentle hands-then again through the telling of your feeling of spiritual connection and final unavoidable loss.
Thank you for the sharing.

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Bill link
6/11/2013 05:45:44 am

Thanks Mom .. I'm always so pleased when you read and comment on my blog. Love You .. Your Son

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Jacqueline
6/11/2013 03:31:53 pm

You touch my heart with your loving, compassionate soul.

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Bill link
6/12/2013 11:39:20 am

Jacqueline .. I'm so happy to see your comment .. Thank you for those kind words. Bill

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Karen Cafarella
6/12/2013 05:03:08 pm

Such a beautiful story. Brought tears to my eyes. Thank you for sharing.

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Bill link
6/12/2013 07:28:05 pm

Karen .. I am so appreciative and touched by your comment. This writer has truly been touched by his readers! Thank you, Mahalo Nui, et Merci for taking your valuable time to comment. Bill

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Bill link
3/17/2015 01:21:46 pm

Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate them very much. Mahalo et Merci, Bill

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