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1/7/2017

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Totality

Can it be,
as appears to me,
​ Love has sweet aroma?

​For knowledge thus
I must confess
​no suitable diploma.


I shall be schooled ..
​Aye .. Golden Ruled .. ​by Hibiscus ..
lovely flower.

​Fragile beauty ..
​undeniably rare ..
​bedazzled in dew by showers.

​The lesson to learn
from that glorious plant
​is true and so revealing.

One would think,
​from petals soft and rare,
perfume would leave you reeling.

​As in love ..
as in life ..
​perfect beauty we don't always see

​Hibiscus is rare
to the sight none compare
​but for nose .. nothing will be.

So sniff them all ..
​large and small .. 
it'​s a quest fun and free.

But pluck no flower
until the moment
when your eyes and nose both agree.


Bill Facker
​January 7, 2017
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Wishing you perfect sights .. delicious aromas
​
... and Love
​

from Kauai to Paris .. and all places between

11 Comments
Cynthia Lewis
1/8/2017 11:36:52 am

Your beautiful poem today is insightful yet "playful", too ... if a poem can be described or felt to be this way. You are starting the new year off with generous "gifts" for your readers! Thank you and best wishes for 2017!

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Cynthia Lewis
1/8/2017 11:46:39 am

P.S. When my parents retired, they moved to south Florida and had hedges of hibiscus. This is when I fell in love with these exquisite blossoms.

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Bill link
1/8/2017 02:17:20 pm

Thank you, Cynthia .. If I am giving gifts, you are certainly "gifting" me in an even larger manner with your comment! Happy New Year 2017 to you .. may it be your best year ever!!

Mahalo et Merci
Bill

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Patty
1/8/2017 04:37:50 pm

Schooled, ruled by beauty...I can dig it! Great poem, Bill! Thanks for sharing your thoughts and beautiful photography, and Happy New Year '17!

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Bill link
1/8/2017 10:48:58 pm

Thank you, Patty .. love your "I can dig it" phrase :-) Happy New Year 2017 to you as well .. Wishing you a fantastic year!

Mahalo et Merci,
Bill

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Heidi
1/9/2017 11:45:04 am

What a lovely thought conveyed by such a lilting, lovelly poem!
Thank you, #1

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Bill link
1/9/2017 01:22:26 pm

Thank you, Mom .. Oh my God (aka OMG) "lilting" you say? My Scot must be showing!

Love,
#1

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Karen Cafarella
1/9/2017 07:19:37 pm

Love has sweet aroma. It conjures so many thoughts and yet it can be so simple as well.

Another amazing gift from you Bill, thanks and Happy, Happy New Year!

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Bill link
1/9/2017 09:43:37 pm

The gift is all mine .. the sweet comments I receive from you and those like you, Karen.

Mahalo et Merci,
Bill

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Scott
1/11/2017 06:55:26 am

Bill. Fantastic rythym. Very enjoyable. Thanks for the ride!

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Bill link
1/11/2017 01:40:32 pm

Brother Scott ! Thank you for this nice comment .. truly appreciated.

Mahalo et Merci,
Bill

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